And these are my finals for my flowers and pencils. Taking into consideration of previous comments by the class, I have made some changes.
Flower: It was commented that the fence for the garden concept (my name) seemed to come across too strong, and the flowers were not able to hold the attention. I felt either the name or the flowers had to steal the limelight, and I chose the flowers. Hence, the fence is of a lighter colour as compared to the bright and strong colours of the flowers. I wish for viewers to focus their attention on the flowers before recognizing that my name is there.
Pencils: Chose the writing style of the pencil as it was favoured widely. Suggestions were givent that more styles could be added on to show the versatility of the pencil. I had attempted to do this to the very best of my IT knowledge. After this was presented to the class for the final time, it was commented that certain letters could be written with thicker strokes of the pencil, to further show the pencil’s versatility. Now I am equipped with the IT skills to do that…. hahahahaha.
